Wednesday, 2 August 2017

The Wave Pools


For our writing we used a writing frame, we attempted different types of sentence starters to improve our stories.

Arriving at the entrance, the wave pool staff greet us with a kia ora-Introduce) Waves topple over people like bombs. Being sucked into the unknown, I look over my shoulder to seeing an array of people-Sight) Chlorine scrambles up my nose like a bullet-Smell) The feeling of sizzling water sends tingles through my veins-Feel)  crashing waves send signals to the laughing kids to enter the water-Sound) Kids and adults alike play in the shallow-Observation) And after a big day, heading home doesn't sound like such a bad idea-Wrap it up)

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